I would like to invite all jump up members to visit my website at www.wellcentergroup.com and give me some feedback on the set up and information presented. I really would like to get some objective ideas. Thanks for your thoughts and time!
1. Make the page headings (Welcome, Services, etc.) larger and left justified.
2. avoid using completely fluid design if possible. For people with widescreens (like me), it is hard to read all the way across as I lose focus.
3. You DEFINETLY need more descriptive title tags. For example, the home page should say
I thought it was very clean, professional and easy to navigate. It presented your information in a succinct and easy to understand manner. I agree with onyxlogix's comment about making the headers left justified. Some were, and they just looked better. The ones that weren't seem a little "jarring."
Sorry, some of my comments did not go through last time. As i was saying...
You need more descriptive title tags. For ex, your home page should have a title that describes your company in a short phrase. For example, my site says "Web and Print Design - Business Management - OnyxLogix" you need something like this. Also add keywords and description tags if you haven't already.
It is very clean, though I would add some more pertinant picture to the header that shows your company.
SERVICES PAGE:
There were a lot of space in between different services, at least on my computer. I would fix this. Also consider adding some pictures of each service.
As always good luck. Let us know how we can be of assistance to you!
Sawan
OnyxLogix
http://www.onyxlogix.com
Hello My name is Jerry Kinnan. I have recently started a home based business. This is my first attemp at such an endevour and hope it pay's off. My web address is www.jhkcorp.com, and I'd really appreciate any feedback you have on the site. Thanks in advance for your help, Jerry Owner JHK Corp www.jhkcorp.com
Hi Jerry, Would be great if you coud stat a new post for your website critique.
-Hersh
http://hershbhardwaj.blogspot.com
What did you design the page with? I don't mean to pick but the source code is terrible. Onyxlogix is right about the title tags. They are important for search engine optimization. Overall it's not a bad looking site though. I would maybe rework the left navigation as it looks a little out of place. Just my 2 cents.
I am going to dig a little further into the goal and purpose of your site:
Q- What do you want people to do? Learn? Buy? Contact?
A- Decide and make it somewhat obvious.
Q- Are you aiming for a local or national presence?
A- If local, it's a bit of a different animal.
Q- How are users expected to convert into prospects and how easy have you made it?
A-For a small site the ability to contact - form or phone - should almost be on every page.
Best,
Steve
Who buolt your website? You? and if so can you send me some information? I reviewed it and liked it, easy and clean.
I think it looks great. did you build it?
chris
greatglobaldeals.com
